Star persona video feedback and learner response
Mr Halsey feedback: good framing to shot-perhaps could have got slightly closer
music is interesting -good pace and fits montage style but not sure it fits montage style but not sure it fits the genre of the makeover...also not long enough so it repeats!
final images are brilliant-superb effects and a costume change too. However , it seemed to jump from mid makeup to final shots...perhaps the time lapse needed to be quicker>?
ultimately, the final effect is outstanding -well done
feedback from peers
www: good makeup,innovative idea came off well,good time lapse, suitable speed,good final shits at the end
EBI: better lighting,use more suitable background music, tilt the camera so it focuses more on the character.
Personal feedback : www: my plan in which to create a modern monster from the underworld was executed well and looked somewhat professional
EBI:I chose suitable music for my theme (horror) rather than one that was quite generic and repetitive
My mood board effectively reflected my final product really well . Also the mood board has photos that were clear and easy to link to eachother.
If I was to tilt the camera so it faced the model more then it would have made for a better quality video , also if edited with a stronger software then I could have avoided the fact it was so choppy and a bit fast
As a whole the importance of mise-en-scene is very big because with out certain things like costume or lighting etc.. it can negatively effect the final product and make the final product look unprofessional
music is interesting -good pace and fits montage style but not sure it fits montage style but not sure it fits the genre of the makeover...also not long enough so it repeats!
final images are brilliant-superb effects and a costume change too. However , it seemed to jump from mid makeup to final shots...perhaps the time lapse needed to be quicker>?
ultimately, the final effect is outstanding -well done
feedback from peers
www: good makeup,innovative idea came off well,good time lapse, suitable speed,good final shits at the end
EBI: better lighting,use more suitable background music, tilt the camera so it focuses more on the character.
Personal feedback : www: my plan in which to create a modern monster from the underworld was executed well and looked somewhat professional
EBI:I chose suitable music for my theme (horror) rather than one that was quite generic and repetitive
My mood board effectively reflected my final product really well . Also the mood board has photos that were clear and easy to link to eachother.
If I was to tilt the camera so it faced the model more then it would have made for a better quality video , also if edited with a stronger software then I could have avoided the fact it was so choppy and a bit fast
As a whole the importance of mise-en-scene is very big because with out certain things like costume or lighting etc.. it can negatively effect the final product and make the final product look unprofessional
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